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Song of Solomon 4

16 aligned verses; 16 with wording or punctuation differences .

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Lo, thou `art' fair , my friend, lo, thou `art' fair, Thine eyes ` are ' doves behind thy veil , Thy hair as a row of the goats That have shone from mount Gilead ,
How beautiful you are , my darling— how very beautiful! Your eyes are like doves behind your veil . Your hair is like a flock of goats streaming down Mount Gilead .
Thy teeth as a row of the shorn ones That have come up from the washing , For all of them are forming twins , And a bereaved one is not among them.
Your teeth are like a flock of newly shorn sheep coming up from the washing ; each has its twin , and not one of them is lost .
As a thread of scarlet `are' thy lips , And thy speech `is' comely, As the work of the pomegranate ` is ' thy temple behind thy veil ,
Your lips are like a scarlet ribbon , and your mouth is lovely. Your brow behind your veil is like a slice of pomegranate.
As the tower of David `is' thy neck , built for an armoury, The chief of the shields are hung on it, All shields of the mighty .
Your neck is like the tower of David, built with rows of stones; on it hang a thousand shields , all of them shields of warriors .
Thy two breasts ` are ' as two fawns, Twins of a roe, that are feeding among lilies.
Your breasts are like two fawns, twins of a gazelle grazing among the lilies.
Till the day doth break forth, And the shadows have fled away , I will get me unto the mountain of myrrh , And unto the hill of frankincense.
Before the day breaks and the shadows flee , I will make my way to the mountain of myrrh and to the hill of frankincense.
Thou `art' all fair , my friend, And a blemish there is not in thee . Come from Lebanon, O spouse,
You are altogether beautiful , my darling; in you there is no flaw .
Come from Lebanon, come thou in. Look from the top of Amana, From the top of Shenir and Hermon, From the habitations of lions, From the mountains of leopards.
Come with me from Lebanon, my bride, come with me from Lebanon! Descend from the peak of Amana, from the summits of Senir and Hermon, from the dens of the lions, from the mountains of the leopards.
Thou hast emboldened me , my sister -spouse , Emboldened me with one of thine eyes, With one chain of thy neck.
You have captured my heart , my sister, my bride; you have stolen my heart with one glance of your eyes, with one jewel of your neck.
How wonderful have been thy loves , my sister -spouse , How much better have been thy loves than wine, And the fragrance of thy perfumes than all spices.
How delightful is your love , my sister, my bride! Your love is much better than wine, and the fragrance of your perfume than all spices.
Thy lips drop honey , O spouse , Honey and milk ` are ' under thy tongue, And the fragrance of thy garments ` Is ' as the fragrance of Lebanon.
Your lips, my bride , drip sweetness like the honeycomb; honey and milk are under your tongue, and the fragrance of your garments is like the aroma of Lebanon.
A garden shut up `is' my sister-spouse , A spring shut up -- a fountain sealed.
My sister, my bride, you are a garden locked up, a spring enclosed, a fountain sealed.
Thy shoots a paradise of pomegranates , With precious fruits,
Your branches are an orchard of pomegranates with the choicest of fruits, with henna and nard,
Cypresses with nard -- nard and saffron, Cane and cinnamon, With all trees of frankincense, Myrrh and aloes, with all chief spices.
with nard and saffron, with calamus and cinnamon, with every kind of frankincense tree , with myrrh and aloes, with all the finest spices.
A fount of gardens , a well of living waters, And flowings from Lebanon !
You are a garden spring , a well of fresh water flowing down from Lebanon .
Awake, O north wind, and come, O south , Cause my garden to breathe forth, its spices let flow, Let my beloved come to his garden , And eat its pleasant fruits !
Awake, O north wind, and come, O south wind. Breathe on my garden and spread the fragrance of its spices . Let my beloved come into his garden and taste its choicest fruits .

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